The passing clouds, the flowing river
To the eyes they appear so clear;
The sun rises and sets,
Though not true, the belief is preset;
Again, the eyes here sees, not to forget...
Life presents itself in mysterious ways
To see and to believe are rather miles away
Misleads and misjudgements being very common,
Perhaps these are the only means,
Through which our mind clearly "sees",
I reckon.
Life is the best teacher,
Experiences are the best learnings,
With time comes the patience,
To accept these facts, we are often reluctant..
All that glitters is not Gold
For someday or the other the truth unfolds....
PS: Couldn't really come up with an apt title for this post...
PS: Title suggested by a friend :)
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@dilip: cooool!!! :)
@Anonymous: Thanks
Superb......am speechless...nicely written....Would like to honour u as a VERSATILE WRITER...gud job..keep up...
@prshanth: speechless?? nything wrong ??? ;) jus kiddin... aadru Swalpa jaasti aagillla??? :) anyways thanks... :)
Beautifully thought out :)
Interesting thought. Basic yet profound. Are we not just a decision support system with a knowledge base that limits our ability to "see". The "preacher called life" is then the feedback loop to enhance this knowledge base. :-)
I think it would have been still better to read, if there was a predictable pattern within the writing. Just my 2 cents.
@Sreejith: Thank you!!!
@Sagar: Very nice and apt analogy drawn here by you :)
And yes, i did have an urge to re-write this one coz i too felt the pieces could be better fitted.. Somehow din want to do it :)
Thanks for an honest feedback :)
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