A quadrangular love story!!  

Posted by Divya A L in

The sun fiercely growled,
Heated up the sky;
The sky melted,
Pouring tears as it started to cry;

In the greens was an Angel rainbow,
As the tears touched her, blossomed her smile;
The sun saw her , made a bow,
Appreciating her beauty and the lovely trail;

The Princess lightening got jealous,
That the Sun fell for the Angel rainbow;
She turned herself charmingly bright, to impress,
The mighty Thunder caught her glow;

The angel rainbow rised higher,
Towards the sun;
She kissed him momentarily, thus calming down the fire,
Contented, the Sun disappeared with his fastest run;

The sky gathered in chunks of clouds,
Showering blessings of tears again;
The angel disappeared in the Greens,
She was thanked, the sky felt no tinge of pain;

The thunder was put to test,
The princess seem to run everywhere;
Everytime he was nearing her crest,
She disappeared in the darkness somewhere;

PS: In the pretext of heavy rainfall this evening....

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10 comments

dilip  

Among all the characters (the sun, sky, rainbow, lightening, Greens, clouds and thunder..;)) i am trying to figure out the three who are form the triangle..;)

September 23, 2009 at 11:06 PM
Divya A L  

hehe.. its the Sun, the rainbow, the lightning ofcourse.... :)
Finally i wrote a "non-understandable" poem :P

September 24, 2009 at 9:03 AM
dilip  

Now adding a fourth dimension to the triangle?!?!?!
What triggered the change?

September 24, 2009 at 9:25 AM
Divya A L  

I pitied the "thunder".. whom i had imagined to be a villain!! ;) The 4th in the row is the "mighty thunder" ;)

September 24, 2009 at 9:29 AM
Sleeping Devil  

Love stories are always depressing. Triangular & Quadrangular love stories are more depressing :(.
BTW where did the lady love disappear?

September 26, 2009 at 8:27 PM
Divya A L  

@SD: Yeah.... They are... But in my story, the sun and the rainbow had a momentary crush ;) A love triangle amongst sun, lighetning and thunder, who's hellbent on getting the lightning :)
The rainbow is a mystery ;)

September 26, 2009 at 9:34 PM
Sreejith  

Missing the rains this time.. :)

September 30, 2009 at 9:16 AM
Divya A L  

@Sreejith: Don worry it'll snow in a few days time na :)

September 30, 2009 at 9:46 AM
Surya (RADHAKRISHNAN G)  

Gifted narration!

October 14, 2009 at 11:10 PM
Divya A L  

@Surya: Will take that as a complement!! Thanks!! :)

October 14, 2009 at 11:23 PM

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