Throwing more light....  

Posted by Divya A L

The sun was very hot that evening. Clouds seem to melt coz of his heat. Melted droplets started coming down to earth. One such droplet disturbed the sleeping rainbow. Rainbow woke up to show off herself... Sun was mesmerised by the beauty of the rainbow. The sun rays were peeling out of the rainbow that apparently looked like lip lock. The lighting who was eyeing the sun got jealous witnessing this. She flashed brightly several times to impress him. But who caught her glare was the thunder and not the sun. Lightning ran to escape... Thunder kept following. Rainbow, and the sun slowly slid down (chalu ppl). The clouds were happy that they did not melt anymore coz the sun had calmed down. Instead they shed tears of JOY!!!

I tried to write about the sudden change in weather that day. It was scrotching hot when i left for home in the cab. In half an hour's time there was a heavy downpour!! :-S


So,here's the summary of the previous poem!!! I don't want to write poems hereafter :'(

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8 comments

:-)
Again what triggered the explanation? ;)
Poems have their uses and somehow there is always artistry in them..(which you have exhibited)..:)
The best part is that they make the reader also think and use his/her imagination...And there is never one meaning to it..But again if one wants to express oneself in a way that others too get the point then prose rulz..:)

Lastly Never say Never! ;)

September 27, 2009 at 12:53 AM

@dilip: ppl kept asking who is who, who are the four involved, etc... Some found it complicated confusing and difficult to comprehend. Thts why the explanation ...

September 27, 2009 at 9:06 AM

Not everyone understand poems. Hope my comment didn't add to your sudden decision to stop writing poems. I am novice, when it comes to poems :(
But then I do like reading your poems :)

September 27, 2009 at 5:14 PM

@SD: Yeah... Sometimeseven i don understand... But many were asking so many Qs.. I don knw if they were trying to pul my leg or they really din und ;)
And ofcourse your comment didn't offend me in anyway!!! :))

Hey pass on your gmail id.. Will chat smetime :)

September 27, 2009 at 9:27 PM

Added you on FB :)

September 29, 2009 at 11:30 AM

Don't write the poems anymore. Just key them in, that would suffice. :-)

September 30, 2009 at 2:57 AM

This post was very beneficial for a poetry-challenged person like me.. hahaha..

September 30, 2009 at 9:12 AM

@Sagar: hehe :)

@Sreejith: Peotry-chanllenged and you??? Tooooooooooooo much!! :-|

September 30, 2009 at 9:46 AM

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