The message  

Posted by Divya A L in

People change
Change in a wide range
The range that sees no guage
The 'no guage' resulting in an outrage

To live in such a world all our age,
Be full with courage
To maintain the civic sense of patronage
"Raise your voice" is the message.

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10 comments

"Rise your voice" may be the message,
But that strategy is no assuage,
If one is not happy,one should change,
never expect others to change is the adage.
...:)

April 29, 2009 at 11:39 PM

@dilip:
Expecting others to change
Was not the intention of this message..
This message if you deeply envisage ,
Its an honest wish that others don't change :)

BTW your message was very true!! :)

April 30, 2009 at 12:15 AM

Jana change kelthaare Divya... hahaha.. nicely written!!

April 30, 2009 at 5:37 AM

@Sreejith: I know!!! :( n thanks!! :)

April 30, 2009 at 10:45 AM

I mean to cause no malice
But the word you used is not 'rise'
Delete my comment without a trace
And replace the post with the word 'raise'

Short and sweet otherwise, and good messaging.

May 2, 2009 at 12:36 PM
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May 2, 2009 at 8:45 PM

Of course your message didn't cause malice
If i had to think so, it would be injustice
I did pause at that word before posting, thinking twice
I now realise what i did was unwise.
Anyways, you pointing it out was something nice
Nicer was your poem and glad you "raised your voice" :)

Hope i am not wrong this time :) And thanks!!!

May 2, 2009 at 9:01 PM

nice one.........
as it includes good message.......
i usually go through your blogs as and when time permits.....
Keep blogging.......

May 4, 2009 at 3:15 PM

@naga: Heyy thanks!! :) Yup will do :)

May 4, 2009 at 3:27 PM

@naga: Heyy thanks!! :) Yup will do :)

May 4, 2009 at 3:27 PM

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