A disturbed mind  

Posted by Divya A L in

The swarthy look on his face
Arms working in a quick pace
Hitting hard against the nail
The target never seems to fail


The beast on the other side
Roaring ferociously, everywhere he glides
The prey tightly pressed in its paws
The bloodpool grew as he pierced the flesh in his claws


In the other corner i hear the cries of a child
Being lost in streets, the cries turned wild
From far across, mom saw its plight,
Ran into a speeding car, people witnessed a horrific sight


The sounds of bloodhounds
Filled up the air, intense and profound
The burgler had escaped,
While the barks never ceased


All these happening at one single place
Hard to believe, difficult to face
Solace and comfort i try to seek and find
But their sounds echo, makes my mind - numb and blind!!

PS: Suffering severe/acute headache since the past few weeks.

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14 comments

Lots of disturbing sights? Or is it thoughts? :) And what's with the headache.. did you see a doc?

July 23, 2009 at 10:32 AM

@Sreejith: Its a mix of both. The sounds of it all have infringed that terrible headache. Doc is only a temporary help.

July 23, 2009 at 11:29 AM

@Sreejith: The mind is so disturbed that i am not able to make sense outta this crap post.

July 23, 2009 at 11:30 AM

You sound so disturbed :(. This series of incidents sounds like a nightmare. Initially, after reading I couldn't comment, imagining all the incidents. It gave me a goosebumps.
Such thoughts can only lead to a headache. In such situations only the person who is suffering can act as a doctor.
BTW thanks for putting an end to the writer's block :D

July 24, 2009 at 11:12 AM

@SD: Yes, lots of mental turbulence. :( I lots more to write.... NOt finding time... :(

July 24, 2009 at 3:58 PM

You need a break. Relax :)
Time is always there, but it is we who are not available :)

July 24, 2009 at 8:19 PM

@SD: Correctly told.. i need abreak badly.. feel like gng somehwer far off....

July 24, 2009 at 8:56 PM

Sreejith, why don't you arrange visiting visa for Divya. Break ka break bhi ho jaayega aur US ghumna bhi ho jayega ;). What say Divya?

July 24, 2009 at 11:46 PM

@SD: WOW!! AWESOME IDEA!! :))) Sreejith is silent.. :-| hahaha.. just kidding ;)

July 25, 2009 at 9:06 PM

@SD: I would, but Divya doesn't like the US.. right, Divya? :D

July 25, 2009 at 9:23 PM

@Sreejith: At the moment, i wouldnt say no even places like "UGANDA"!!! :P

July 25, 2009 at 9:52 PM

@Sreejith: See she is ready to come, so better arrange things fast :) ;)

@Divya: Bon voyage :)

July 26, 2009 at 10:42 AM

Time is the best healer of all..:) So by now i hope the headaches are far away..;)

August 20, 2009 at 10:10 AM

@Dilip: Yeah looks like it!! :)

August 20, 2009 at 11:16 AM

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