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:) hehe, this one alone is too much to bear, forget the "dubaara" :D
@Divya: So in the end you came out of it or not? :)
If you havent you can use your "Temper" or "Healthy Imagination" to come out..:) (Points taken from your previous post on handwriting analysis..;))
@dilip: hey I am not well, so taking rest!! Will start my trials afresh from tomorrow :P
"Temper" was already tried and yuck, it was bad :P "Healthy imagination" - for me it is to "not imagine" :P
hi Divya,
i request - you should culture the poetess in you. undoubtedly, thoughtfully written.
(to hold the curiosity this could be rearranged as:)
To end it even before it could start,
With little or no chance to retort;
Laughing cynically closing the gate,
There stood the monsterous fate;
(to end it with a positive note rearrange as:)
Looking out for exit to get to,
In vain, had no luck hitherto;
Finding the way back, turned around to gaze,
Found abandoned amid beautiful maze;
@kuruhina: Thank you Sir! :)
From the way I see it, the first line sets the context and the rest goes onto add details to it. . . So, I feel it would be better the way it is...
The positivity or the curiosity - never gave them a thought. These were but just those unadulterated thoughts of mine intended at myself! :)
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